Monday, August 10, 2020

Against All Odds Blog Tour: 7 Books to Understand Your Character’s Psychology

7 Books to Understand Your Character’s Psychology
By Jacqui Murray

An efriend writer originally published this as a guest post on their blog to help me launch Against All Odds August 2020. In case you missed it there, here are my anecdotal thoughts on how to add drama to your story:
Characters have to be believable. If not, readers put your book down. If your character is a mathematician, he has to think like one, act like one, dress like one. It's not enough to tell us he works for the NSA analyzing data. You have to give him the quirks that make us believe this guy could save the world with his cerebellum.
If you're not that guy, how do you convince readers? Traditional wisdom says two things:
  • interview people
  • watch people
Those are good--especially for your main characters. In fact, you probably can't create a protagonist and antagonist without interviewing those who have walked in their footsteps. But what about the dozens of other characters who wander through a scene, playing bit but important parts in your plot? Here are some great books that will allow you to color them with a consistent brush:
  • Anatomy of Motive: The FBI's Legendary Mindhunter Explores the Key to Understanding and Catching Violent Criminals by John Douglas. If you write mysteries or thrillers, this book will help you explore what makes criminals who they are.
  • Creating Character Emotions by Ann Hood. She explains how to write compelling fresh emotions for your characters. Much of this lies in the showing-not-telling truism; she explains how to show hostility, hate, etc., rather than saying the words. Similar to this one is The Emotion Thesaurus by Angela Ackerman
  • How Mathematicians Think by William Byers. Hint: They don't think like us. I have a brilliant friend who--I kid you not--hates graphs because they distill the information for him. He'd prefer the raw data so he can see the connections. If you're including someone like that in your plot, this book will make sure you include ambiguity, paradox and their other brilliance in your character's thoughts and actions. Me, I used this book (and my brilliant friend) as a template for the character Eitan in my Rowe-Delamagente series.
  • The Man Who Thought His Wife Was a Hat by Oliver Sachs. Any of his books will give you insight into creative, fascinating psychoses that people live with. In this particular book, a man can't look at a person as a cohesive picture. All he sees are bits of red and pieces of animals--and in the case of his wife, a hat. She does always wears one so that he'll recognize her. A character in the early stages of that psychoses might be a fascinating addition to your story
  • Please Understand Me I and II by David Keirsey. This is a personality style determinant. Very detailed, but highly relevant for analyzing your main characters' temperament, character and intelligence.
  • The Writer's Body Lexicon by Kathy Steinemann. If you want characters' bodies to go beyond appearance to help you build tension, intrigue, and humor, this book tells you how with word choices and phrases for body parts organized under clear categories.
  • Writers Guide to Character Traits by Linda Edelstein. This includes profiles of human behaviors and personality types. That way, you can keep your character within the required parameters.
  • Body language. There are so many great books and websites on this. I have many posts on descriptors and character traits that will get you started (see the right side of this blog). Don't miss this detail. If your character doesn't show those tells that every human on the planet does, s/he won't be believable. No one speaks only with their mouth.
If you have favorite books on this subject, share with us. I'd love to hear about them!
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Jacqui Murray is the author of the popular Building a Midshipman, the story of her daughter’s journey from high school to United States Naval Academy, the Rowe-Delamagente thrillers, and the Man vs. Nature saga. She is also the author/editor of over a hundred books on integrating tech into education, adjunct professor of technology in education, blog webmaster, an Amazon Vine Voice,  a columnist for NEA Today, and a freelance journalist on tech ed topics. Look for her next prehistoric fiction, Laws of Nature, Winter 2021. You can find her tech ed books at her publisher’s website, Structured Learning 

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Xhosa’s extraordinary prehistoric saga concludes, filled with hardship, courage, survival, and family.

A million years of evolution made Xhosa tough but was it enough? She and her People finally reach their destination—a glorious land of tall grasses, few predators, and an abundance that seems limitless, but an enemy greater than any they have met so far threatens to end their dreams. If Xhosa can’t stop this one, she and her People must again flee.

The Crossroads trilogy is set 850,000 years ago, a time in prehistory when man populated most of Eurasia. He was a violent species, fully capable of addressing the many hardships that threatened his survival except for one: future man, a smarter version of himself, one destined to obliterate all those who came before.

From prehistoric fiction author Jacqui Murray comes the unforgettable saga of a courageous woman who questions assumptions, searches for truth, and does what she must despite daunting opposition. Read the final chapter of her search for freedom, safety, and a new home.

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Wednesday, August 5, 2020

IWSG: Unplanned Writing Forms and Keep Writing With Fey


OPTIONAL QUESTION: "Although I have written a short story collection, the form found me and not the other way around. Don't write short stories, novels or poems. Just write your truth and your stories will mold into the shapes they need to be."
Have you ever written a piece that became a form, or even a genre, you hadn't planned on writing in? Or do you choose a form/genre in advance?

Short answer: Yes.

In tenth grade, I wanted to "Be An Author!" (say this in dramatic tones with sweeping arm gestures). 

My tenth grade English teacher wanted us to write poetry. I didn't want to write poetry. I told her I wanted to write fiction, and only fiction. She encouraged me to try poetry. She thought I might like it. I did. It shocked me. I hid my poems from everyone except the teacher, who encouraged me, because I was embarrassed that I liked poetry. Poetry?! Me?! 

I kept writing it secretly. In college, I noticed poetry in the newspaper. The poetry there didn't look much better than mine. In fact, I thought maybe, just maybe, mine was good enough, so I sent some into the college newspaper and waited for a response. They promised a phone call. I didn't get one.

No, they didn't call me like they promised. They just published everything I sent them, so I found out after my first poem was in print when a roommate said to me, "How could you write something like that? I don't know if I can talk to you again."
Wait, what?

My first poem was published and it made Tsunami-level waves in my social life. Some people hated it with a passion and refused to speak to me. I literally lost 20+ college friends/acquaintances. Some people loved it and wanted me to sign their newspapers. Some people sought me out quietly to talk to me about it. I gained a few new friends. :) 

BTW - I have only one copy of that first published poem, and I haven't shared it with anyone in years. One of the people who really "got it" was my dad so he is the reason I have a copy. He actually took it to work with him and showed it around to everyone (and lost a few of his friends and gained different ones - it's really a kick-in-the-gut poem). 

I still wanted to be a - now say this like a blockbuster movie title - "FICTION NOVELIST" But, poetry had worked its way under my skin. I had time for poetry. I could spend fifteen minutes on a poem and feel like I had made progress. When I spent fifteen minutes at fiction, I felt like I could barely get in a rough page that needed hours of work.

I don't like to call myself a poet. I feel like people expect "Great Things" and "Romantic Things" and "Perfect Word Choices" instead of words like "things" from poets. I don't rhyme particularly well. I struggle with iambic pentameter and spondee. I have to revitalize my vocabulary with glimpses at the Thesaurus. But, I still write poetry. The first time I was ever paid as a writer was for a short story, but the next five payments came from poems. Poems don't earn a lot of money, but getting paid for them feels a little extra special since most places don't pay for them at all.

And, I have a tendency to write poetry that isn't kind, sweet, beautiful, or "lovey." I have a tendency to write poetry about the stuff that hurts the most, which brings me to the next topic - an entry for the Keep Writing with Fey Blog Hop.


For the blog hop: Share your story about writer's block, depression, and/or burnout and how you overcame it or what you are currently doing to heal.

I think you can imagine from the above bit that I have definitely struggled with my writing. I love writing. I struggle with writing. I have felt like I have failed at writing at least a hundred times, if not a hundred thousand times. I have been burned out. I have been depressed. I have been so terrified of writing badly that I couldn't seem to get anything on a page. And yet, I really love to write. I do. 

So, how do I overcome the bad days (weeks, months, years)? I give myself permission to not write for whatever project I "should" be working on for the day/week/month/year. This may throw me off course, but then, if I'm really in a bad way due to health issues or any other reason, I'm already drifting at sea with no wind in my sails.

I keep writing by seeking out the joy of words - by listening to poetry I like and writing it down - not plagiarizing, but quoting it in my journal. I write down scripture verses and quotes I like. I've written down lists of words I like to taste when I speak (I used to hate speaking, so these lists used to be small). Have you ever felt the way a word sounds in your mouth like a taste of something delicious? Okay, maybe that's just really odd, but I love words that much. I like to sing, so I write down song lyrics that I know and ones I make up. I write to prompts. I write Nail Polish Stories - which I find unique in the idea of writing a nail polish color as the title of a story that's only 25 words in length. I write snatches of dialogue and phrases I like. I take notes on sermons and books. I write down lists for the day.

When I'm not writing, I walk, I sing, I dance, I ride my bike, I read, I drink tea, I sit with my dog and cat on our back deck in the sunshine or the rain or even snow and breathe in fresh air. I pray. I hope. I ask friends to go walking with me. I ask people to tell me their stories. 

I even had a project stem from asking people for their stories - Walking with Jesus: Stories from One Hope Church.

And, I let myself write angry/sad poetry or prose poetry, if that's what I really need to do. Recent Examples: Tacks Between Us and Sticks and Stones.

I have found through the process I go through, which means this may just be me, that when I can't write, I am often blocking myself. I'm holding something back. That something may not fit within my current WIP, so I need to go release it somewhere - in my journal, a poem, a string of words. Once I get it off my chest and rediscover my love of words and story, I can write again.

If you are depressed, please seek help. It makes a difference to talk to a professional counselor and/or a Pastor who can help you. I really, really means this. I have had friends and family members who have attempted or committed suicide. I have experienced depression due to medical and emotional struggles, but I sought help when I needed it. I think help is incredibly important. There are counselors who can help without high costs associated with them. Seek them out. Ask a Pastor for a referral. If you are really down, get the help you need now, please.

If you are struggling with writing blues or burnout, I recommend Chrys Fey's book. It has some great tips in it!

When Chrys Fey shared her story about depression and burnout, it struck a chord with other writers. That put into perspective for her how desperate writers are to hear they aren’t alone. Many creative types experience these challenges, battling to recover. Let Keep Writing with Fey: Sparks to Defeat Writer's Block, Depression, and Burnout guide you through:

        Writer's block
        Writer's burnout
        What a writer doesn’t need to succeed
        Finding creativity boosts

With these sparks, you can begin your journey of rediscovering your creativity and get back to what you love - writing.


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Again, Chrys Frey's book is great, but if you need help for depression, please find it for the sake of all who love you (and someone does). I can't stress this enough, especially this year. 2020 has been  a bit rough on all of us.

What about you? Have you written a genre or form you didn't expect? Have you struggled with burnout?

Wednesday, July 29, 2020

New-Old Endeavors, Revisited + Reading Roud-Up

As a teacher and tutor, I've been working with small groups of homeschool students, individuals, and  public classrooms for many years now. I like teaching. It can be a joy. It can be a challenge. I feel like I can make a difference. I feel like I have made a difference. I want to keep working at it. For a while, I tried to get back into it full-time. Instead, I kept tutoring and teaching small groups.

Now, it's COVID 2020, and I have been teaching and tutoring online.

I've had some good moments teaching online. 24 tutoring sessions which went well. 15 class sessions which went well.

I've had some bad moments teaching online - a free online class where no students showed up because I hadn't been clear about the time and the time zone. I live in the Pacific Northwest, and Pacific Time is three hours behind Eastern Time. When did people show up? Eastern Time. Yikes!

With a great deal of thought, I decided to continue forward and open up a new business based on the model I've been using for years in my local community solely by word of mouth.

Words Take Flight: Teaching, Tutoring, and Editing has an official platform now. I am still working on some small pieces for it, but if you are interested or know someone who might be interested in Grades 9-12 and adult online classes in writing, tutoring for English and Language Arts, or editing on short works like college application essays, academic essays, or short stories, check it out here:
Words Take Flight

And, because I always have a question: which one of the above do you like best?
The top one is my old business card.
The new one is the banner I'm currently using for my website.
I thought I liked my new design best, but I still like my old one for clarity.

I haven't done one of these in a while. I'm definitely not going to go over all the books I've read, but I will mention a handful with comment and star reviews. I decided to include books I read in a variety of genres, even though I am partial to SF and Fantasy.

Science Fiction:
Children of the Fleet by Orson Scott Card. Another takeaway from the Ender's Game series, this one felt like it trotted out some old themes with new characters. World-building took a new leap and I always like Graff, but I had to push myself through parts of it. 3.5/5

Lost Helix by Scott Coon. This SF felt fresh and new, full of the possibilities of space colonization, but that wasn't even the best part. The best part of this novel is the friendship and the relationship between the main character and his dad. Great character and world-building! 4/5

The Novice by Taran Matharu. An excellent, enjoyable read with interesting characters and great world-building, this adventure had me hooked from page one through the end. However, as a Christian, it took me a few years to pick up this book and read it because of the whole demon-summoning aspect. I told myself he was summoning beings from some other plane of existence and let it go. Once I did that, it was really good. 5/5 for most readers, probably only a 4/5 for Christian readers with content concerns. 

The Dragon's Heart by David Powers King. This beautifully written fairy tale adventure felt like a wonderful return to traditional fantasy, but with a complex heroine at the core. World-building, character development, and adventure were all solid. 5/5

Historical Fiction
Salt to the Sea by Ruta Sepetys. A beautifully written, multiple viewpoint historical fiction book for YA readers, Salt to the Sea had compelling, individual characters who came together slowly and solidly for the final part of the novel. I did have a little trouble getting into the head of one of the antagonists, who lived in a fantasy world most of the time. 4.5/5

Is this SF or Fantasy? Post-apocalyptic?
The Ballad of Songbirds and Snakes by Suzanne Collins. Beautiful writing, a greater depth of world-building for Panem, and some excellent secondary characters didn't completely save this book for me. I really didn't like being in the POV of a young Snow in this prequel to The Hunger Games. 3.5/5

Marly in Pieces by Cathrina Constantine. A beautifully written mystery with a troubled heroine that comes together like pieces of stained glass to create a complex novel. 5/5

Reaching for Normal by Jemi Fraser.  A heart-broken woman and a war-torn man come together in an icy wilderness adventure to save threatened wolves, and each other, in this sweet and sexy romance. I don't usually do heat as a reader, but it worked in this romance novel. 4.8/5*.

*I am not a huge romance reader, especially anything warmer than "sweet" so I am never sure if I am the right person to review these. Plus ... this is just a note for every romance writer I've read in the last few years: please stop using the phrase "dueling" to describe kisses full of tongue. This comes from someone who used to fence with sabers. It's not the same. No matter how heated the kiss, I would never describe it as dueling.

Dancing with Dementia by Jemi Fraser. This vignette-styled journey through the writer's experiences of caring for a parent and a step-parent with dementia is written with thoughtfulness, humor, and graciousness. I really appreciated this book and the tips in it. 5/5.

Middle Grade/Children's
Warren the 13th: The All-Seeing Eye written by Tania Del Rio and illustrated by Will Staehle. This quirky, adventurous mystery has an intelligent, interesting protagonist, some dastardly villains, and some really strange secondary characters. The world-building, masterful illustrations, and story-line reminded me of James and the Giant Peach. I really loved it and highly recommend it - even if you are far older than the intended audience. 5/5

Current Reads: 
Keep Writing with Fey by Chrys Fey
Wielder's Curse by Elle Cardy